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Post by Digital on Jul 23, 2009 13:32:39 GMT -5
This is an example of a bad profile. Do NOT mimic this profile in any way. I will tell you what is wrong in parentheses.
Name: nera penny guro (no capitalizations or quotes) Gender: Female, but can act like a guy a lot. (Too much information) Age: 15 (nothing) Pokemon: Roselia (not a first-form pokemon) Description: Like an average Roselia. (Nothing) History: Grew up in Sinnoh and became a great trainer. She was strong and her pokemon were powerful. (Too short, and not descriptive enough. Arrival: She fell asleep one day and awoke to find herself in Cotrin. (WAY too short, undescriptive, and your character does NOT awaken until your first post.) Estimated Strength: 100 (Nothing) Money: 500 (Too much money and was not set by me)
That is an example of what NOT to do when creating your profile. And hopefully, I won't have to deal with such a lack of creativity.
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